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5 more years of birthday bliss...

dreams of cake and ice cream
like sugar plums (without the nutcracker)
dance in her head tonight

letting us know in her many ways
that the countdown is almost over
and she'll soon be 22

I'll soon be 27
but the excitement of birthdays is gone
oh, to be young again and dream of cake
and ice cream instead of:

stubborn eye-wrinkled nightmares
that come out when I smile,
that one persistant grey hair
I've plucked about a hundred times
to no avail and
a soon-to-be husband
who barely knows the purpose
of wrapping paper!



Happy Birthday Christina!



Enjoy it while you can!





may you come back at the end of the 7th day of the 8th month
and write us your birthday frolic memoirs before forgetfulness
lumps it in with all the others and leaves your sugar-plummed ivories
mimicking the colour of black piano keys in mozart's moonlight

Author notes

for our very own amaranthine lover on her 22nd birthday
I barely even remember mine. haha

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  • I quite loved this!


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    August 6

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    I think I'm leaning more toward your end of the spectrum. I'll be 39 on my next birthday. I still like my birthdays but I don't celebrate like I did when I was 22!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 6

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    Hehe cute hun! Christina will love
    this... your thoughts filled here
    with such honesty, kindness
    & good ol' birthday wishes

    Beautifully written