you always told me that you cared,
but when i needed the most of love
you were never there
we started as the most obvious dream,
but after all the dust settled it was only a lost memory,
you said you gave your everything,
but in the end i always wound up with nothing
i loved you for who you were,
but now that i see who you really are
all my thoughts were just so absurd
i did everything for your stupid ass
and all my hopes and dreams
turned into once known pile of ash
after i thought you were so much
my heart began to be more and more smashed,
i will get the proper kind of revenge in my eyes,
and i swear to you now i will become your worst known demise
you never can keep you fucking mouth shut,
and when they showed they cared,
all you gave in return was an i don't give a fuck
i cant believe i thought you were so right
because now that i think about
you pushed me into an everyday emotional fight
you show no sympathy for anybody that cares
and when it comes down to it your to greedy to be fair
and peoples love for you has to become a dare
i hope that someday somebody will eventually figure out
after all the heartache you tend to show
shamefully enough they will see what your all about
A contest entry
- Hating your ex? Hating your so called "friends"? Boyfriend Cheating on you? WHY NOT ENTER!!! MANY OPTIONS!!! by Shannon62875.
425 points, ended September 28, 31 entries
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love it
wow i felt that same way u know i like always gave my 100% and did everything 2 get it back in return except all i got was lie after lie after freakin lie so i feel where u were coming from on this i love your poem
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Very good... i can feel the anger and pain you put into this write... you did a great job of showing how you felt and putting your feelings right out there.... i also hope the same for him... cold-hearted bastards! i tell you what, they are everywhere...
you did a great job.. keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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