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She Just don't Get It

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baby don't love me
he told me so
sometimes my baby ain't nothin
but a cold asshole

spends all my money
sleeps in my bed
all a time i wonder
why my baby ain't dead

cause he steals from the neighbours
robs all his friends
one day he'll face the devil
hellbound to a bad end

but i loves him
lord god yes i do
i loves my baby the whole day through
i'll loves my baby 'til the day i dies
cause i know deep down there
a good man hides

my baby don't love me
but i know he's a liar
cause when i loves him
i sets him on fire

he's just afraid
of what good lovin can do
but my mama tells me
i'm a goddamned fool

cause he's always chasin other women
gettin drunk or gettin high
he don't care
if this lovin woman cries

but i loves him
good god i do
i loves my baby the whole day through
i'll loves my baby 'til the day i dies
cause i know deep down there
a good man hides


yes i loves him
the good lord knows i do
i loves my baby the whole day through
i'll love my baby 'til the day i dies
cause i know deep down there
a good man hides

mama says i'm a fool
and maybe it's true
but a women's gotta do
what a woman's gotta do

and i loves him
lord god yes i do
i loves my baby the whole day through
gonna loves my baby 'til the day i dies
cause i know way deep down there
a good man hides

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  • Tzipora
    September 20, 2009

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    but i loves him
    lord god yes i do
    i loves my baby the whole day through
    i'll loves my baby 'til the day i dies
    cause i know deep down there
    a good man hides


    - my favorite part. this was a wonderful write. i love the voice that i could hear saying it. well done.


  • AllexisReed
    August 7, 2009

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    Great poem!! I should say, great song!! Flows perfect and the rhyme is right on the nose!!

    Thank you for entering my contest!! I'll be back later to judge and comment!


  • Mallig gold member
    August 6, 2009
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    This is a sad song because you know there probably isn't anybody better hiding in there... Great lyrical flow, well done!


    • malkinpuss silver member
      August 7, 2009
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      Mallig

      uh huh... u hit the nail right on the old proverbial head ! thanks for your comment and thoughtful insight!