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This Is Real

How do you know when you find the real thing?
For me it was so easy to see,
When I need a helping hand,
Or a just a reason to smile,
There he is,
Holding out his hand,
Waiting for me to accept his offer of help,
Whispering sweet nothings into my ear,
He has no shame of what we share,
But he'll murder the first person to hurt me,
He looks out for the best for me,
And gives me all his heart,
Shows me that there is more to life than what I thought I knew,
Just when the storm comes in,
He's standing there holding an umbrella,
Keeping me dry and protecting me from the pain,
Just when I want to give up,
He gives me the strength to continue forward,
I never knew a man could make me feel so alive,
Make me come back from what I thought was my death,
I never knew my heart could be so full,
I never knew this feeling could exist,
Trying to put my feelings into words is impossible,
Because there is no amount of words that could ever tell just how much he means,
Eternity isn't long enough,
Love isn't a strong enough word,
But it's as strong a word as I can use,
No matter what the haterz say,
I'm going to make sure we get past any obstacle,
Nothing will keep me from him,
Because this is the real deal,
This is what real love feels like.

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