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a B C D

Anyone's allowed an anarchist's attitude,
Bravery breeds bloody bureaucracy,
Congress calculates casualty's,
Despite decaying disorderly discontent.

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  • Mrs. Kodak
    October 14
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    love it


  • Keith E. Gerber
    August 20

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    Good job

    I would only suggest a spelling correction. Good job still.
    Congress calculates casualty's should be: Congress calculates casualties.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12
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    Ohh wow, very creative!

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    Thanks for sharing,
    keep writing!

  • stormchaser
    August 8

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    I must say that this is the most unique take on four lines I have read yet! The abcd scheme that you used is very original and still manages to convey a startling message. I am impressed that your scheme did not denote from the message within, if anything it worked to enhance the poem itself. Thanks for entering!
    ~storm


  • Miss Macabre silver member
    August 6

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    This wordplay is amazing. It flowed perfect. I also loved what you've done, this a b c d scheme you have going is very clever. Good luck in the contest!

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