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One night stands and co dependant girls.

When words fail

Savor the moments

Heartbeat

Surety

It's just the beginning

I fell in love...Then it was Monday

I never got your name.

Author notes

This is my second entry. I tried one of these this morning, enjoyed doing it and wanted to see what else I could do... Not sure if it works but I kind of like it.

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  • J. M. Spenser
    August 6

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    Thank you very much for coming back. This truly was a nice poem. You spin a tale without much saying it. I like that in anything. Well done. Hopefully you will find my next round unique as well.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    August 6
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    Been there...lol. Great write. I loved it. Keep up the great writing!