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Protect Her

You break her heart and I'll break your face,
She's fragile beyond comprehension,
You see a strong woman,
Who does occasionally break,
But you'll never realize that she's held together by tape,
Very little has kept her sane,
Very few things can make her purely smile,
You filled her with joy,
Something I haven't seen in her in years,
She giggles and laughs,
And even let you see her tears,
She isn't afraid of being vulnerable with you,
She's not afraid of showing you behind her mask,
So protect her like the porcelain doll she is,
And don't pretend you don't know her,
You see her everyday,
You see her hiding when you look deep in my eyes.

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  • Shannon62875
    August 6

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    very good.. i really enjoyed reading this write.. ITs so emotional.. i can tell that your really looking after this person who you love so much... VERY GOOD!! keep up the great work!!!

    Shannon*Leah