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Revived Angel

Life given back to a broken soul,
A smile returned to stay,
A dead girl brought back from the underworld.
Who is the cause for this change?
Who is the reason the fragile one feels joy?
Was it you who she loved for so long?
No it couldn’t have been,
For all you do is cause her tears.
Is it you who from so far captured her heart though she hardly knew you?
No it couldn’t be,
For you showed her that love just isn’t worth the change.
Was it you who taught her that distance makes the heart grow fonder?
Yes,
Indeed you are the reason she smiles when she wakes,
The reason she no longer cries herself to sleep.
You’ve given her reason to be happy with her life,
You’ve given her back the youthful sparkle that she lost so long ago.
She felt her life slipping so slowly,
She felt the end coming near,
But then you returned to her life,
And suddenly she no longer has reason for tears.
An angel broken by years of agony,
Her wings are slowly mending,
Perhaps you’ll be the reason she flies again.
Protect your little lette,
For she needs you more than she shows,
It’s not for dependency though that she needs you,
She needs you so that she can feel the joy she forgot existed.
You’ve revived her spirit,
Her heart no longer feels empty,
So show her that she’s worth it,
And she will stay by your side forever.

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