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Dark Cento I

The ultimate betrayal
hides amongst shadows.
Angel wings on a slum girl,
against the wall
forever inked.
Little did they know;
mistakes haunt you forever.

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    August 8

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    Hard to believe these are all unconnected titles, except, perhaps, all one's poetry IS somehow connected, in ways we might not have realized until an exercise such as this. Beautifully done, and amazinging meaningful! Lita


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 6
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    Ah yes, this is great from your own titles to boot! Best wishes,


  • J. M. Spenser
    August 6
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    Wow, this is awesome. Quite really awesome. I love it much. Great great great!!!