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KelseyAnna Sisko

You're defying gravity and flying high in the western sky,
I can remember the day we met with fondness
I must admit I giggle to think of our little rendevouz,
Of which we had only one... maybe two?
Yet it is with even more of a smile that I think back,
More recent days come to mind now.
You cling to me like a freaking SPIDER MONKEY,
though I can't say that I mind cradling you at night.
Your smile brings me great joy,
your frown makes me hurt inside.
You say you're fat and ugly,
I say that all I can see is perfection.
My darkest of nights are lit up by your radiance,
Glowing from now to the end of all things.
Should your sun ever stop shining,
Look to me and I will light your path.


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  • No revision needed, truly.

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    Made my heart skip a beat.