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Growing up

looking at the point

of no return

but growing up 

is something I have to learn

 

Memories haunt me

Some remind me

Of a chilhood

I once had

 

Looking back 

Makes me scared 

To know

I'll never be that way again

 

My Birthday on tuesday

Not wanting to grow up

And wishing

That date would just fade away

 

 

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 16
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    beautiful write, lovely rhythm, overall amazing job

    x


  • Little Lesley
    August 13

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    That was totally great. Wish you a Happy Birthday (but if it's past don't worry about it!) Nice write. Don't you hate when you grow up, you'll could never grow down?
    Grow up but no grow down. I would hate to grow up. I wish I could stay young, so I'm still cute! But I can't! Oh well. That's life!
    Wish you the best of luck!
    ♥~Little Lesley~♥

  • confussed one 83
    August 12
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    one line in that poem is me i do not want to grow up eaither happy birthday


  • broken-angel
    August 12
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    nice write chick xxx


  • ScarletStainedTears
    August 10

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    great write and i like the point behind it and the emtion great job


  • Fallen-Thumper
    August 7

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    Lookink <--- Looking
    This is a really great piece but even if it doesnt fade, your still growing up.
    Birthdays should be remembered not feared.
    Great job and a great write. Brilliant!


  • Thasia
    August 6

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    whahaha i can relate to that feeling i don't like birthdays ether
    nice poem thanks

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