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Come on Ice Cream!!

Jalapeno peppers atop a spicy dish
It was such a tasty treat
For dessert some french fried ice cream
This meal could not be beat

Later in the evening
As upon the throne I sat
My body was convulsing
Wondering "Where's the ice cream at?"

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