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your young pet

i sit in your lap panting.
your collar tight on my neck.
strocking my cock, im your pet.
use me master,
abuse me master.

ill do  as you wish,
suck you bite you,
pound you roughly.
use me master,
abuse me master.

ill eat you out master,
moan your name,
whip me if you want.
use me master,
abuse me master.

im your pet master.
your young pet master.
make me your disaster.
use me master,
abuse me master.

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  • blackfang4318 gold member
    November 4

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    o wow how wow i love it and wow
    so mucch details here


  • Night Rose
    October 27

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    Daughter of Night

    wow I loved this one and it's very kinky lol but very good hmm so your willing to ber her pet nice poem very well written

    sincerly,
    angel

  • firesofhell
    September 27
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    i couldnt sleep so i decided to read ppls poetry...
    wow this poem is good. i like it. got me all excited lol


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    September 1

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    wow this is my kinda poem my mouth is watering


    • firion
      September 1
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      i hope your mouth isnt the only thing i have watering
      ty for the comment! glad you liked

  • I am not quite a Master. I am truly a Mistress. I like how you have worded your poem to me. I will see, but, you do sound like a nice little pet.


    • Darc Raven
      August 8
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      (to Aphrodite): didn't do an AN with his name in spaces. >.< sry, had to point it out.


      as for the poem:

      hmm.... sounds like you are very willing... lol.
      kinky...

      i would say good luck in the contest, but it would seem you are the only one to enter as of this... sooo..... lol.


      • firion
        August 8
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        the way i took it was you only had to put your name in it if you wanted her to kno who it was
        anyway ty for your comment!


        • Darc Raven
          August 8
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          ah, true true.... i misread it... am at work half asleep.. lol.

          well..... if my muse hits me before this contest ends, i'll give it a shot myself.... lol..


    • firion
      August 7
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      ahh srry i think i wrote it with a headache so i prob wasnt thinking of correct wording. glad you loved the poem its not one of my bests but it seems somewhat decent look forward to maybe becoming your pet

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