but you said you loved me, so what the hell changed?
change comes in very many forms but this?
this was simply too much to bear, i'm sorry
sorry for me was just another word
but words you said changed my mind about that
about meaningless words that do in fact
provide facts about the way you feel about
about us and our relationship so dear
with a deer like fragility you rest
rest your mind and your thoughts and your body sweet
sweetness tomorrow is a brand new day
daily we shall walk together very soon
soon you will never be apart from me
but be a part of my life or so you said...
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new form. i mixed wreath (where last word is repeated on next line) with vaughanet (form of sonnet) but without the quatrains... just the oddly placed couplet.
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I like this. The first line sounds like it could be a song, I may steal it
just kidding
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wreaths are musical ^_^
and no stealy. write your own lol
thanky
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