Its a hole in my heart
That can't be fixed
You've left an emptiness
That's a gaping abyss
I think of you
And I start to fall
Through bottomless space
And countless betrayals
Into the darkness
I make my descent
And my heart cries
Will this ever end?
Author notes
Its not about my love life...just FYI.
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Oh this speaks to me of the countless teenage years of torture we face! Those years we think we understand and know our kids, have worked them out once more, and then blam they strike us out once more! It eases with each passing year past 18 I guess, as maturity sets in and other people move into their lives, where everything becomes so much more serious and older crowds are seen less and newer circles encourage much as we do... Great write although needed your author notes to clarify away from the love we expect this to speak of...
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So many possibilities with this one, and
until I read your AN's I thought 'love life'
making this all the more intriguing...
I am not sure what is causing such suffering
but what I am sure of, is that I love this piece!
Always a pleasure to read you!
Thank you for sharing.
~Pastel
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Lol, I figured 'love life' would be the 1st thing that popped into anyones mind with this one...no, its the path my daughter has chosen unfortunately. I don't think anyone has the power to hurt us as much as our kids do
Thanks so much for the comment, sweetie, I'm glad you liked this one
Selena
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