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You make me (When I want to)

You make me laugh
when I want to cry
You make me live
when I want to die
You make me smile
when I don't want to
You make me love
everything about you

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  • pondainwonda silver member
    October 1
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    cool

    short & SWEET


  • UncleDunk gold member
    September 25

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    This is what I call a "Jenny Kissed Me" poem. There is a long story behind what that is, but what I'm saying is, it's short, sweet, simple, beautiful. It's a poem that, when one has slogged through a dozen deep and cryptic pieces of writing, I would go back and read to bring me back to Earth, and make me smile.

    • MercedesBbenz
      September 25
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      Now that you mention it, this poem does remind me of another poem I read before. It's probably where I got my idea from. Thanks for the three applauds!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 8

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    welcome to all poetry

    Nice emotion in this, it's amazing how love can make everything exactly as it needs to be. Good poem.

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    Shawna
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    • MercedesBbenz
      August 8
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      I wasn't so fond of this poem at first, but thank you and thank you for welcoming me to all poetry

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