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Mission

Miles from home,
I turn and watch you
Sleep in the back seat, your toes curled up and blue from the cold. I
Sang to you when you were younger.
I know you don't remember.
Over the next hill, at the stop sign, you stir.  But you
Never open your eyes.

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