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Hate

Fuck the child of a damn bastard god,
You're not a saint, you're a sinner you're a fraud.
Don't deny because I knew all along,
I don't care, I don't care!
You're just an apathetic man who is sick,
Suck the blood like a parasite, Tic!
Not a soul would honestly get this,
I don't care, I don't care!

Apathetic! I don't care,
Apathetic! Get me the fuck out of here,
Apathetic! You're not my god
I don't care, I don't care!

Kill your son, rape your daughter, just give in,
Birth the child of a damned bastard sin,
No respect for own blood and kin,
I don't care, I don't care!
Rot in hell, your are so far below me,
And when you're there I'll be there waiting,
The word "stop" no it wont mean a damn thing
I don't care, I don't care!

Apathetic! I don't care,
Apathetic! With cold eyes I stare,
Apathetic! What do I want?
I don't care, I don't care!

I don't care,
You'll beware,
'Cuz I'll be there,

Bitch your fucked!
Covered in blood!
You'll die here!
You'll be scared!
I'll smile!
I don't care!

Apathetic! I don't care,
Apathetic! Death has drawn near,
Apathetic! And I accept,
I don't care, I don't care!

Author notes

Something extremely simple, and the choice of words is also rather simple. Even the way I would sing this is in a genre that I'm not too fond of, yet, there's something about it I like, so comment if you wish, and enjoy. (but still keep in mind that this is a rather poor piece compared to others I've written).

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