I found you. The two were one
the motion of her hand united with
your face and frame exploding
with laughter von Kopf bis Fuß
auf Liebe eingestelt designed
for love that way who
said once 'I'm here, I'm right here'
and you in extrapolation were
the voice, the presence
of directness & naked candor --
who never for me
went over the top like that
and I having seen this
will always
more than any holy or forbidden thing
want you
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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lovely poem. Im impressed. A mix of sensual and erotic and intricate in its flavour. well done.
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I don't think I could have said it any better than indomitable. But it was a fantastic, stunning poem, and the emotion was powerful and impacting.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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so... sad and funny and...
uncomfortable.
its as if i had seen a photograph of the moment, and in doing so, had both seen too much and yet... somehow not enough. a very enthralling and interesting write, makes me want to read more, thank you.
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well written
a well written piece that made not only good reading but a lot of sense also thank you for sharing this take care kathrin x
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