I'll wait for you, in the next life to be
you'll find me laying, beneath an old oak tree
sprawled out amongst, wild flowers and grass
dreaming of you and our times that have past
I've embedded my memory into the depths of your mind
so that my voice, my eyes, you can always find
for with you it is, I want to be
spending my lives, of eternity
And now please know, that it is you I love
Even when I sleep its you I dream of
loving me, as I do you
for now, until forever, my love
I remain ever true...
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Beautifully done Sis...
Stirring narrative with great imagery & flow that reflects love & past life cognizence that moved me in its depth...
Impressive as always...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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excellent
This was true yearning and longing at its best. Superb write that got my adrenalin flowing right and fast. Such affection and attachment only a gew woman could exhibit and express. I enjoyed this peom word to word,,and line to line,and end to end. I so much wish that you would visit me ...pan out my portfolio and findsevral poems that are in this evry genre. I would love your comments as well. -
Amazingly penned... The longing and need and promise in this write is beautiful...
Keep your pen flowing with ink that never fade...
illusion
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The reader is taken through life looking in memory to join the narrators desire. This is a powerful force to extend the reader to peace and love that will forever remain. Thanks for the read
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Wow. This is so sweet and beautiful. I loved this. So honest and kind.
Congratulations on being today's poem.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Beautiful...
This is a lovely poem. It flows on waves of sublimity to the lake of love.
Keep Your pen busy, Poet.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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this is a lovely and a powerful piece, i enjoyed every bit of it. i truely enjoyed reading it. thanks very for sharing this piece.
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This truly is beautifully written, I enjoyed reading every single line. You used simple words and yet told us so much, showed so many deep feeling. I love that!
Great job!
Nela
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very nice write! true love is a gret thing. this was my favorite part! " I've embedded my memory into the depths of your mind
so that my voice, my eyes, you can always find
for with you it is, I want to be
spending my lives, of eternity"
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Stunning
Between the first and last breath...we call it life. Something mysterious happens and we're all locked in...we call it love. I don't know how this could have happened but the stars have conspired in our favor. I'll wait for you but if I fall behind... wait for me. -c
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what a lovely write and sweet delicate words.. keep up please
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what a lovely write and sweet delicate words.. keep up please
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So lovely
This describes in beautiful images and words the love of our life we all wish for. You have a wonderful talent and your words are pure music.
solitaire
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Thank you so much, I am humbled truly! It was just a write from my soul....
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This poem is so reminiscent of my own first love..when i was enamoured by her enchanting beauty at first sight..dreamt of sharing a life with her..but alas life had other ideas...she was never meant for me in this life...she ignored me every time i tried to get near her which has left behind indelible scars on my psyche..i really envy the people who fall in love and live happily thereafter because my beautiful love story crashlanded even before it could takeoff...how I would love to have my incomplete love story come to fruition in my next life if I get one..
Sorry for boring people with my wishful fantasies...but lemme take the opportunity to thank Dixie Dawn for another wonderful poem on the mystifying word called 'love'.. -
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YOU ARE NEVER BORING!! TELL ME ALL YOUR TALES! I am like you, it all crashed...I will never have that love happily ever after, so, I write about it. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING IT WITH ME THAT MEANS MORE THAN I CAN SAY....LOVE, DIXIE
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This reminds me of the movie coming out, "The time traveler's wife"...this is a beautiful testament to a true love. Nicely written and I love the rhythm of it, too. It read great, not forced...
Blessed Be,
~Raven
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I WANT TO SEE THAT MOVIE!! My favorite one is "Somewhere In Time" and thats how I write my pieces, as if I could keep my love forever...THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
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A lovely write, beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
~ Tim
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
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fantastic!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH, TRULY!
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Dixie, this is just perfect a true delicate balance between that which feel right and that which would be over the edge.
We all should feel this way about love and at times even the one that got away.
I like it, I like it so!
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YOU ARE SO WONDERFUL!! THANK YOU SO, IT MEANS MORE THAN I CAN SAY, FOR IT WAS JUST ONE OF THOSE WRITES, FROM THE SOUL....
LOVE,
DIXIE
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My friend, this is just stunning. This is the sort of thing that can make a full grown man stop and stare, if not tear up. A love with the sort of depth that many will unfortunately never know.
Bravo!!!
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You my friend, made me tear up, with your wonderful comment, and thank you ever so for adding this one to your favorites, I am humbled beyond words for love and friendship...truly...
Love
Dixie
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aww this is so beautiful dawn!! I love this! Amazing Dawn!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Thank you so much sweetie!!!
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what a beautiful read , this reminds me of [the time traveler's wife']
this write feels like i have peeked into someone journal way back when
just simply lovely you have been Featured in Todays Poems
Love & Blessings to you Ms Dixie,
Rend
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Thank you so much truly!! You know I am dying to see that Movie, my favorite was always "Somewhere In Time" thats how I did this piece, for it came from my soul...thank you for sharing it with me
Love
Dixie
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this made me tear up... i know i know
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Yes I know
Thank you sweet sister, for crying with me! Love You!
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