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Spoken From Beyond

Hello?
Once-Upon-a-Time Friend
Lay Your Cards On The Table
Who Are you Trying to Call?
This Lonely Lady
Was Already Disturbed
Goodbye

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  • J. M. Spenser
    August 6
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    Brilliant. This is well done. Bravo. Very well done try.