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Wait for Me

Your Eyes,
Deaf To My Screams
Take Me To Heaven.
Whispers of Forgotten Dreams
Wash Me Clean.

Can You Hold On A While,
Under a Soft Neon Glow?

A contest entry

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  • Frogzter gold member
    August 6

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    THey all fit together so perfectly! Well done! All the best to you in the next round!

    Frogz~


    • ShaShay
      August 6
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      Glad you like it. I have always liked a challenge.
      Sharon


  • J. M. Spenser
    August 6
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    This is superb! Most wonderful I love it. Next round for yOU!