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I Emptied Out My Veins Onto A Page

I started to write you a letter
But the words became smeared
As tears muddied the ink.

Come to think of it
The words didn't make sense anyway...

How do you express your true feelings
With words?

Only my heart knows what to say
But how do I let it explain itself?

I suppose I should just let it flow onto the page
The patterns of drips and puddles will show you...

So I emptied out my veins onto a page
& red splotches say all the words I couldn't.

You may not be able to understand it
But your heart knows mine,

& They understand each other
In ways we never could...

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  • Great poem and an awesome use of the title prompt. Keep it up


  • BitterDreamer
    August 8
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    awesome...

    this is truly beautiful. i could feel your pain in every word.


  • Miels
    August 7

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    loved it

    well you know i would not beable to find flaw in what you right but i love ALOT i love you hun always and forever


  • eastwind32
    August 6
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    Insightful. Your pain was well told and skillfully written.