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This Feeling

Cursed be my Blood
If ever I let slip
The feelings I Have
For a One of a Kind friend
Devistation and Destruction
Would undoubtly acure
And this Friendship
That I hold Dear
Be Burned Forever

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  • Suffer-in-silence
    August 10

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    i reallly really like this one
    i hate when tht happens to friendships
    well anyway wonderful job
    -rose


  • Biggest-MIstake
    August 9
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    i like it it is good
    good write
    i hate when that happens to my friendships


  • ScarsFade
    August 8

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    i hate when that happens friendships can be so special and so very close to us as well, i enjoyed this a lot it was one of your more gutsy poems that you don't always attempt to do. Really loved the image of the devistation and destruction..really intense....keep writing..much <3...scars.