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lucifugous larvae

the candle burns
its wick descends
into the flesh
the fire decays

my lids are sealed
in a vast span of black
masking the hands
that lit the flame

I do not move
I hardly breathe
but most of all
I dare not speak

until both worlds
are lost to me
fumbling feeble
as a translucent weevil.

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