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Forgiveness

I let the cat out of the bag.
  It came all teeth and claws first,
making snake-slit eyes across my face
  (yes, a punishment deserved)
It's back an arched promise,
  tired of hissing lies
a        l u n g e.

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Concise.

A contest entry

tear me apart

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  • Kathraina silver member
    August 17

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    Ouch! Scary imagery there!
    Amazing job with this write, I love the concept you've used here!
    Fantastic flow and imagery throughout. Short and sweet
    Bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ Kate