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The Friend Zone

when you enter,
the zone of friends,
the girl thinks you are charming.

but when you go,
from out to in,
they thing you are alarming.

their way of saying,
this is not true,
is mostly around one scheme.

to make you think,
that they have thought,
all of the cinarios through.

the truth of this,
is your too close,
they dont want to even try.

because if they do,
and it falls through,
they've lost one of their grindstones.

they dont look at,
what it could be,
if it all works out just fine.

why do girls act,
oh why do they act,
why do they act so... blurhgy...

does anyone know?

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  • refinnej
    August 7

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    Girls are complicated. Sometimes they are drawn to the bad guy, not the one that knows her soul....ironic. They usually get hurt and end up crying on the friends sholder....but never see that he is the one they belong with......
    Good write, i think you were meaning to say "they think you are alarming" instead of "they thing you are alarming" hehe but im one to talk.
    Take care,

  • nice words, girls and how they work eh


  • SuperMickey
    August 6

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    Awh

    This is good. i know from experience being a girl we can be complicated but.. Good poem i liked it


  • Zia-
    August 6

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    Lol

    Girls girls girls, yeah men never seems to understand us then again it depends on who you charming, some girls aint as open minded as others, and yeah I guess that is a question left unanswered on my side

    well nicely penned

    Zia,

    • thanks! haha, yeah, girls are evil haha. jk. some are. thanks for the comment!

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