i scream at my reflection,
i ask if it understands,
because i don't,
and i doubt i ever will,
but whenever i laugh at a mirror,
it laughs right back,
Author notes
mirrors. yes. it is much easier for me to write songs while listening 2 music.
A contest entry
- Hungry For Poetry...easy contest by Kia Tenshi.
800 points, ended August 21, 12 entries
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love it...i've noticed that too....and sometimes...it's damn annoying!
(lol)
I've had a few serious conversations with myself in the mirror....
and my reflection always appears...."surprised".........(big sigh)
(soft giggle)
way to write
another poem the Gluttons would love to chew upon and enjoy!
ears2hearyou
GLUTTON SALUTE!
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Every morning...
I look at myself and tell myself I need a haircut. Then tell myself "No". Good stull poet...makes me smile.
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wow!
Your insane!!!(: Love the poem.
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Short, sweet and perfect. If you can't laugh at yourself you are screwed!
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lol. most true. thank you.
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Great
this certainly does get to the point very short but good message well done i like it it all makes since to me and your right it's kinda like an alter ego to me i guess but the only thing that i don't get is the author notes there pretty messed up idk about them idk either. -
Short, sweet, gets everything out at once. Very nice, I like this alot!
Good luck!
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