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Sister

Though blood runs deep it cannot see

        the sadness that you cause in me

You call me sister and although you shouldn't

ask for more all though I wouldn't

Cross these lines between love and hate

              what you get is not my fate

I would that you were as happy as me but

          sadly I think this will never be......

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 7

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    This is such a sad poem, to think that siblings don't get along...I hope things get better for you!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on here!


    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • miasma
    August 5
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    The rhyming all goes together very nicely.
    Wonderfully put.
    <3