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Killer Whale (haiku)

sophisticated
close-knit and protects his own
the wolf of the sea

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  • Swan song gold member
    August 19
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    nicely formed however i feel as if i am getting facts not poetry what you said in the poem is true however just facts does not constitute poetry. take this poem and spice it up a little. like this


    sophisticated
    wolf of the sea side by side
    with it's young calf. kind of sort of like that it is good you like facts just spruce them up a little