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The End Of All Stories

I am soulless and simple
and my rhymes are all the same
i am drug adled riddled
with crimes that will bring up the stain
for my next trick ill tear up the bodies
and leave all the rings

so you notice the shelter and then you bring on the rain...
so you notice the shelter and then you bring on the rain...

hold fast now my darling
its rapid and changing
the alleys are warnings
to be under used
the fables unwanted
the tables have turned
the people are mourning
for soldiers return

the end of all stories
it cant be the end
the witness's story
all villages bend
the dragons maw
burning for innocent slayings
the hurt and the ringing
its practicly there again...

(instrumental)

hold fast now my darling
its rapid and changing
the alleys are warnings
to be under used
the fables unwanted
the tables have turned
the people are mourning
for soldiers return

again...

coming closer now (x4)
feel the beat
feel the heat
crushing all that you know
feel the beat
feel the heat
razing land from its home...

ah(x4)

hold fast now my darling
its rapid and changing
the alleys are warnings
to be under used
the fables unwanted
the tables have turned
the people are mourning
for soldiers return

again...



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  • spideracer gold member
    September 26

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    Ah yes well...,what can I say? As a poem it has potential to be something, as for your reciting here....hmmmm yes...well lets just say I've heard better but don't give up, for everyone starts somewhere and you will get there if you continue to play the numbers game.

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