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Lost In Deep Reverie (an original rap)

From the middle of a book

and it's binding

I come apart

and I'm crying.

It's a matter of trust

lost and found

secrets in the shadow when I'm around.

Life can be exciting

somtimes seems as if we're hiding

from the truth or from the changes

as we're locked inside our cages.

The dream that really scares me

is the one I know I can be

with hard work, but success

true heart beating in my chest.

My dream won't be the same

not of music or of fame

that will be my reality

now I just gotta make the challenge flee.

The road is so long

my burdens I carry

I feel alone

lost in deep reverie.

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  • Water Warrior
    November 18, 2009
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    I love it! well done! it was a wonderful poem!