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This Country

This country has a good number of souls
That work hard to make this country whole.
From coast to coast, it is a diversified nation,
But it it has, like other countries,seen scenes of desolation
In its times of goodness, abundance, and richness.
It can be  the best country  ever in every sense.

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a hopeful motivator

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 7

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I wonder which country you are so proud of, whichever one it is, it is wonderful to see such pride and strength from a citizen It is a hard thing to find these days

    Poetically I would suggest not starting each line with a capital letter as it indicates a new thought each time & some added punctuation

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