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help.

i dont understand why your looking at me.
im an ugly person you see.
this pain,the lies.
all i do is cry.
hide behind the cuts.
theres nothing left of me.
i dont wanna live i just wanna die.
and yet you still ask why?

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  • kerrypn
    August 5
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    I like the simplicity of this, but I wonder if the bottom line could be expanded slightly to compliment the layout?