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Animal Adjournment(gold)


Animals achieving active actions
always alluring antic attraction,
acquiring acquaintances along amicable avenues
an ancient appeal attracts anew.

Annihilation, abysmally attacked
artifacts accrued, an ambitious abstract,
appeals anticipating acute accordance
as assertions ache an aristocratic arrival.

An awkward age and acute affirmation
an aura acting as an aberration,
attitudes alter, an association
always adapt actions, appearance an animation.

Augment all animals awareness as advance
and able bodied adults avow allegiance,
all apprehension aghast at animal abolition
as artifacts are all assessed at antiquity's attrition.



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Letter A - Animals
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  • Truetome
    August 13
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    congrats on the golden! smiles. cute and fun poem! love,

  • Macsword
    August 6

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    hahahaha Phew indeed

    Holy mackerel you done it!. Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!


  • penman gold member
    August 6

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    Wow

    Yep you poor poet, you got stuck on A. and you did it so well. Best of luck in the contest. You get an A.


  • DaWildChild
    August 6

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    You went all out with this piece and i am very impressed, my reaction after reading this piece is the same as you have in you AN, Very well written-good luck


  • Mariana gold member
    August 5

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    This is alliteration heaven! Well done...I know I would have needed a week's bed-rest if I had written this. Brilliant work!


    Mariana  

  • Phew! is right!!! I'm not sure how you even manage something like this. Would have taken me a month! (at least!) I think I got most of it, so I'm pretty amazed that you made something like this work in a coherent manner. Who says we need the rest of the alphabet? Just wow.

  • Wow I am in awe! Totally incredible writing. I have never read anything like this before. I know that I could never come up with anything this brilliant. I do believe that you will do well in this contest.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 5

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    Holy shite lady, I have never seen more a's in one place in my life, now I could not do this, I'm completely bamboozled. I think it all made sense, heck I don't know I was too busy trying to stop my eyes going crossed! Brilliantly done. best to you in the contest


  • individuality gold member
    August 5

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    oh here i can do my cheerleader dance - gimmie an A - A, eh, what the flippin' flip has happened to the rest of the alphabet. i can't work in these conditions, i want my agent on the set, like now! all this alliteration has just flipped up my routine. a good poem.

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