Can you hear the sound of the drums?
That deep, penentrating sound
Going through your entire body and soul
Can you hear it bringing you down
in whole?
Can you hear that unmissable beat?
Can you feel it bringing undesirable heat?
That noise,
vibrating through your bones
Can you hear it?
Author notes
This is something I thought of... can you hear it?
Its beating through the walls...
Beating in our souls...
Interesting... Interesting!
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wow
a really good write really enjoyed reading it
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Incredible!!
This is a fantstic piece...the song "The Rhythm" by peter gabriel came to mind after i read it..."the rhythm is around us, the rhythm has control, the rhythm is inside us....the rhythm has my soul..."(gotta hear the song)...really great writing...i added u as a fav!! Keep up the good work!!
Windsong
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I like this, it very different from the stuff I usually read on this site. Good work!
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very good:)
this is really good i know this properly isn't what you mean but me being a drummer i always have a beat in my head which i don't mind it even cheers me up sometimes ha ha like this keep writing
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