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Author notes
Prompt ~ 4.) Neurological
Experiment in incoporating imagery and poetry.
( My thanks to the contest holder for letting me try it )
A contest entry
- Picture and word prompts! by J Macabre.
1800 points, ended August 7, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm confused, alright. But not by your poemy thing. 
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This is fantastic! Very original, flowing and fun to read. Your notes say it's an experiment; well! I must say it's a success! Outstanding!
Love,
Amera♥
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hahahahahha!
I loveed it.
But i really wanted to slap it becuse them poem was oh so true.
New, Differnt, but keept me hanging on each word!
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i felt like i was at a fairground or theme park then, in the arcade, all i needed was a little rubber hammer to try and smash those balls of light into the flashing hoops, do it in time and you win a teddy bear. lol a good poem.
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The first prize is really a gold
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okay, a golden teddy bear sat in a gold cup
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Yes
Nifty is an excellent word to describe this! Love that rhyme too, as always. Best wishes with this
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Well lookit that....thats certainly different...the poem itself was pretty interesting as well. This was a pretty nifty and original approach...
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