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Let Us Prey

This is the night.
The night that I am
going to get this right.
The candles lit and roses
spread out on the bed.

She walks in the room
from a hard time in school
looks around shocked.
and I think to myself
" I did it, it's perfect!"

She turns to me
biting her bottom lip,
she starts to take her
shirt off and I interrupt
her, and do it myself.

I work my way to her
skirt pulling it down
and gently rub her nipples
just to tease and get her wet.

She gets on her knees
and starts to take my
pants off, tracing
the outline of my thong
with her tongue.

Lowering them to
reveal my hard stiff dick,
she looks up at me
as if begging to
give me head.

I look in her eyes,
her soft blue moon
lit eyes and she knows
my answer to her begging.
She slowly puts her lips around
my dick...

stroking my balls with one hand
and sticking her finger in my ass.
She starts to go faster
but I stop her as I'm about to
cum in her mouth.

I lay her on her back
and spread her legs open,
and take the handcuffs I hid
from her sight and cuff her hands
to the the railing of the bed.

I start to pour hot wax on
her nipples and down her stomach,
leaning up to her ear nibbling for a bit
to tease her more, I whisper to
her you are my prey.

I get in position to stick my dick
in her soft, tight, wet, pussy
she moans a little so I

slowly pick up speed.
As she screams in pleasure
I start to suck on her nipples.

Grabbing her ass we are both
getting ready to cum,
she screams louder and
louder grabbing the the bed
posts squeezing with all
her might.

Her pussy gets wetter as
she cums, I start getting faster
and faster my face looks as if
I'm in pain as I burst inside of her.

She tells me "I love you!"
And I tell her "I love you too"
I un-cuff her and light a
cigarette and pass it to her.

She puts it out after it's done,
we cuddle and get
ready for bed, then drift off
into a deep sleep.

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The Crow And The Butterfly

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  • TrickJoker
    August 8
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    Lovely :3

    But one quick thing, to let you know, not as criticism, prey is like animals, pray is like prayer.

    Very good though!

  • Grrr!!!

    Line 4: lit*
    Line 15: and do it myself*
    Line 22: pants off, tracing*
    Line 24: tongue*
    Line 39: I*
    Line 43: hid*
    Line 52: (spaces between words)/ pussy*
    Line 56: I*
    Line 63: pussy*
    Line 66: I*
    Line 68: too*

    I effin loved it... It was very sweet and very sexy. Definately turned me on !!! Awesome write & good luck in the contest!!