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Headlong

I try...
To take a deep breath
But I feel the brakes failing
The wheels grinding
The screams ringing
The veins snapping
The blood running

The tears....

I try...
To take a deep breath
But I feel the bones breaking
The resistance falling
The hope dashing
The soul dying

The fears....

Headlong
Hit the wall
Break it down
Watch it fall
The happiness of getting some thing done
Outweighs the consequences bound to come.

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  • Romeo Dragonheart
    August 5
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    It's always easier to beg forgiveness then ask permission just ask me i'll tell you all about it... Hehe .. forgot to tell you that this was a great write and i could really really feel the words flowing and see the images in my mind. Great work...
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