These tears have dried
Since I’ve been a prisoner in your torture chamber of silence
And increasing sexual abstinence
Striving to find out what went wrong
Retracing my steps in hopes of mending the mistakes I’ve made;
Somehow deserving of residing in this cage
Maybe it’s not too late
To free me from the chains of fate
Release me from your chamber of silence
I dream to hear you scream at the top of your lungs!!
Scream those feelings you hide,
Break the silence, let me out
So I can repair all the despair I’ve brought on to you
A contest entry
- Bullets in your Smile by Fallen Under Light.
400 points, ended November 14, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Veryveryvery good, but FreeVerse. =/
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WOW very sensual and one needs to let the screams out not hold it in bless you a fine piece indeed glenn
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Innumerable chambers of silence in the immense Panopticon, each in isolation waiting for a sound of tapping through the wall -- always the fear of screaming.
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This comment is so well written and appreciated sooo much. I feel like you really "felt" my poem. Thank you!
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