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Claustrophobic












We all must continue
  moving ,

            our lines shuffle closely as we bury ourselves
  deeper into the dirt.

The flabby excess of skin must
be contained in the tight corners of
perfection
so our coffins will
    slowly digest in the confines of
his abysmal stomach.












Author notes

Based off of a very vivid dream that I had recently. It's not the best, but when I woke up, it was so vivid and real that I had to write about it. I am really claustrohobic, and I woke up in a panic at the end, haha

I miss you all, but I have my laptop now!

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  • ml12
    August 12

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    I found the stomach reference interesting because of the earth (or ground) being seen as a body of sorts. I also liked the lines. Cheers