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Horrendous Solace

Rested against rusted plate metal...
As i wait for my mind to settle...

Broken lamps dimly light my room...
Atrocious sights of gore loom...

Sound of rain steadily falling outside...
Into the cold fog, my thoughts i confide...

Blood adorned lovingly on my walls...
Gore encrusted bones hanging in the halls...

Relax in the embrace of nightmare...
Cleanse me of all anxiety...

Bathe in the entrails...
To comfort me it rarely fails...

I always return to this Horrendous Solace.

 

 

 

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    August 8, 2009

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    woah. very vivid imagery, i felt like i could see your words. which i must admit made my stomach turn just a lil bit but in a good way haha.

    awesome job


  • SpydurPoet
    August 7, 2009

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    Hmm. Interesting. I love the imagery in this. The only thing that threw me wre lines 10 & 11. You did the rhyming through the poem stunningly well, then boom. No rhyme. Don't get me wrong, it didn't take away from the poem, it was incredible regardless, it just kind of...kind of like an ellipse incarnate, I guess. I dunno. Nevermind. Awesome poem.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • pixiestix gold member
    August 7, 2009

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    We all find comfort and solace in the familiar which is unique to each of us.

    Enjoyed the read.


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    August 5, 2009

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    a deep write of how you always return back to those dark walls..... solace but to others it'd be their nightmare..... great stuff babe xx


  • JesskaSlayde
    August 5, 2009

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    wow. this is really good. i love dark poetry but i have never found someone who can write quite like this. its absolutely amazing, i wish i could write like this


  • lifereaper
    August 5, 2009

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    damn bro,your muse came back full force huh,this is amazing as is all your work,the darkness is where i love to lurk and you're the best place to find it,write a book bro,i'd buy it.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    August 5, 2009

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    why do i always do this?? i read you right before i brush my teeth to go to bed. jeesh. i should know better, shouldn't i?
    a great dark write. *shiver*


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 5, 2009

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    and in my thoughts I dwell
    my room of bloody wonder
    the music cast its spell
    and covet me in rusted metal
    soon the walls tell the gory tails
    of the unsuspected man and how he writes
    from a place known to embrace some hellish nightmare
    you are hot tonight.. this is awesome
    well said Hugs always Angel♥

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