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Perfect Crime

I always thought love was a crime,
and you pay for it till the end of time,
but then I met you and everything changed,
my whole way of thinking was rearranged.

My heart beat is twice the normal speed,
it's not going to slow until I get what I need,
Never again can my life be the same,
and you, my love, are all to blame.

You and your smile, you and your eyes,
you and you humor, you and your disguise.
You're everything I hoped to never meet,
but here you are to make my life complete.

Let's commit the perfect crime,
I'll steal your heart, and you'll steal mine.
I'll risk serving my "time" forever,
if it means we spend forever together.

Author notes

Gross! "Time" means wearing those stupid orange jumpsuits forever! =/

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  • Just Jennifer
    August 19
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    Wow This Is Really Good.!
    Good Luck


  • Sweet-Sins
    August 19
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    o gosh this is great!! love the rhymes!
    x


  • Heroesrox
    August 9

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    I like this background color along with the title and the content of your piece. Awesome work here. I cannot stand to rhyme, but you made it appear effortless! Thanmks for the share. Good luck to you!

  • I like it. I think it's very good. And I like the orange background to go with your "time". lol