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With You

The beautiful sound of ocean's voice
Singing a sweet lullaby to thee.
So sweet and innocent like a child's laugh,
As healthy as it can be.

The soft caresses of the wind-
Upon one's very own face.
So soft and innocent like new love's bloom
In a wildflowerd place.

The thick and salty air so full,
Making the tastebuds come alive.
Craving more of one's sweet kiss,
And the stare of thoes beautiful blue eyes.

The smooth and delicate seashell,
Craddled gently in one's very own palm.
Promising a new life,
The very future that is to come.

A burst of life in a wonderous place,
So full of life and wonder.
But hand in hand with you my dear,
We will always be togeather.

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  • moaner
    August 6
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    awww this is lovely, and i hope it is a dedication to one very dear. such a magical piece. thanks for sharing xxx