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little thoughts

and if everything you say are hollow words
i'd still see you the same because
for the first time i want to waste my time

but can you feel my heart?
can you feel it going towards the ground
speeding fast as lightning
knowing that waiting and seeing is the name of the game

i might as well be in a ocean
floating endlessly, waiting to drown
just so my emotions are concrete
just so the waves can wash me back to shore
where i can be brain-washed just for a few glances

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not done. i just started writing it but i gotta figure out the end now. any critiques so far?!

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