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A prescription for insanity

Clawing my eyes out
because of this bout of sanity,
I wish this dreamland
to go away.

Maggots crawling from every surface
as I feast on the minds
and souls of our not so dearly
departed.

Ripped away from
this hells earth,
by cancer,
and eaten away
by the malice

Oh I binge
on the dismemberment
of society.

Death calls for the loving
Death calls for the living
But I call for insanity.

Strip away the tainted
flesh,
exposed bones,
blood and death...
lay in a dilapidated coffin.
Bottles of empty liquor,
are what lead
to this beautiful
manic depressive
nightmare.

I'm a morbid little vixen,
who dreams of skeletons
fucking virgins...
this beautiful nightmare
this horrible dreamscape
It's in my head...

and I wish it never to go away.

Author notes

P o e t f o r m e r l y k n o w n a s

picked prompt quote

“I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.” - Edgar Allen Poe
with some from the work bank.



I have horrible writers block

I hope to fucking god this is under fifty lines cause I think I like this poem.

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A contest entry

writers block....bleh.

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  • Miss Macabre silver member
    August 5

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    I thought this was a wordbank at first, you used a lot of the words in your poem. And the quote, 'tis a good one.

    Now, on to your poem.

    The imagery, the tone, all are as dark and macabre as can be.

    Oh I binge
    on the dismemberment
    of society.

    I love that! That can say so much, depends on how you look at it.

    Anyways, this is a great dark write, thanks for entering and best of luck.


  • rrw gold member
    August 5

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    Oh I binge
    on the dismemberment
    of society.
    Well, I love the phrase above and all the rest of the poem... Death to a world that takes away from the majority to give to the few... wonderfully stark, and piercing.

  • Deliciously dark and morbid....mmmmmmmmmm....yummy....