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Dear babe

I know I struggle to let you know
But baby its time for me to show
How much you really do mean
And that honestly I am kean

Simple words could never explain
That my love is not boring or plain
I long for the day I can call you mine
You are worth more than any old dime.

The day I feel you are proud of me
Is what will finally set us free
Our love has already had its trials
But Im in this for long miles

The last year of my life
Has stoped my craving the knife
I haven't felt this in a long time
You have put me back on the right line

You are so good for me
You now hold the only key
That unlocks my heart
Please say you will play the part.

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  • aww i loved this, it is so sweet and loving and agh amazing i dont even know how to describe it, but it was really cxute great job =DD


  • Tweevil
    August 5
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    that is sweet

    very good