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I'm standing at the door

I'm standing at the door
I can't hear you anymore
I'm all alone in this world

Bottled up inside
With no one to confide
To, I find myself ignored

So help me
To fly away
Way back
To yesterday
When troubles were a thing of the past

Please help me
To run somehow
I will try
Yes this I vow
To love and be loved
To lose and be found
To conquer and conquest
To bind and astound
I promise you in my moment of truth
I'll be here with you
Yes I'll be right here with you


I'm finding my own way
But each and everyday
You're always here in my mind

I



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Huh. I can't tell if this is finished or not.

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  • There's an "I" at the end. It seems as though you want to say more. Say more! It's good so far.