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Colors folding bending
Spheres and triangles
And useless dogs bending and breaking
What exactly was the point?

Who in their right mind would participate in such a ritual?
Kings? Peasants? Vermin?
I think each exists inside of us

LSD and the Divine whirling inside of a bowl of plastic mechanics
I'm still not sure what was going on
The mighty space cadet was in control after all
Doing this and that and this and that and look where I am!

Space has some pretty colors

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Just something I had to get out of me.

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  • Wolfdog silver member
    November 14

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    Excellent

    And unique, slightly perplexing, yet your imagery is great and did you mean that the 'space cadet', was divinity? (lol) As I implied a rather intriguing write.


  • DonSulliven
    September 19
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    Hmm... so I wonder who's in control...


  • Rockit-DAwn
    September 3

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    I think it is unbelievable that you were capable of making the idea of doing drugs desireable. In this one you used the old standby drugs. I imagine drugs being more of a secret society of addicts. Ones on the less flashy drugs like Oxycodine or morphine, antidepressants, and rittaline. The white color addicts. I still really liked what you wrote. Be well and God bless.
    DAwn