like your fathers gone and passed
one year has gone by fast
it's been awhile
and a rocky year
I hope for your safety
can't wait to have you here
dealing with divorce
and dividing things
it must be hard
and I realized you left your rings
as an honest answer
I really wasn't sad
I had wonderous thoughts
really, I was glad
just a month
maybe five extra days
it'll go by fast
just a quick round of waves
like your fathers gone and passed
one year has gone by fast
Author notes
For my Momma :] she's coming back from Iraq after a one year tour, I'm really excited.
Inspired from "Wake Me Up When September Ends" byy Green Day
I plan to revise, what do you think?
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curious
does ur mom know u write? you should let her read ..
great write..
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she does kinda, she never reads them, I've never let her, and I was planning on it..kinda, still not sure if i would though
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hmm... I am sure its something she would appreciate tho.. but, then again poetry is personal so yea..
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well, yeah, personal, so i might but i might not, doesnt matter either or
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